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Canon DIGITAL IXUS 110 IS
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1/125 second
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5 mm
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80
Date Taken
Apr 12, 2012, 9:58:55 AM
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Bitter Morning by miontre Bitter Morning by miontre
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First off, let me just tell you that this is lovely! You've done a great job of creating a beautiful eye-pleaser, once again. Anything I say in this critique is merely my way of trying to add to this picture, enhance it if you will.

On the originality I only gave you 3.5 stars because I have seen many of these kinds of pictures before. Water and dew droplets never get old, but the angle of the picture does after you've seen several. I would suggest finding a more interesting and unique point of view from which to photograph this. Maybe try looking downhill on this blade of grass, or looking uphill from center view. There are so many more options!

The editing gives this photograph a very "soft" look, which is pretty, but slightly dull. I do love how you've blurred out the background, although you might try sharpening the area in focus a bit more. I found myself straining my eyes to find one really sharp spot in the picture.

One thing I really love about this picture is the colors. You have these calming shades of green with a little bit of burnt brown mixed in. Some of the background almost looks like it has a hint of maroon in it. They mix very nicely together; I wouldn't change a thing on the coloring tone. Overall great picture! I anticipate your future creations! :thumbsup:
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iDJPanda Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
I likey!

Remnds me of =iAmoret 
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iAmoret Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, yes it does! :lol: Glad I'm not the only person kneeling in the grass these days. :giggle:
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iDJPanda Oct 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Haha! You're not alone. xD

what if he didn't lay on the grass? lol

`miontre, do you lay in the grass to take pictures like these? :giggle:
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miontre Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I think I just bent down to take this one, but I have knelt/lied in the grass before! :lmao:

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iAmoret Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I AM NOT ALONE! :iconanimefaceplz:
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iDJPanda Oct 9, 2013  Student General Artist

:giggle:

I think we all have! Then my parents proceeded to yell at me for getting my clothes dirty.. :stare:

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iAmoret Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
then I will still feel stupid .-.

YES, DO YOU? :eyebrows: 
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iDJPanda Oct 9, 2013  Student General Artist

:lol:

 

I DO. WHO DOESN'T? xD

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iAmoret Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LAYYYY IN DAT DERE GRASSESS
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iDJPanda Oct 10, 2013  Student General Artist
MHMMM
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